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Actually, I can fully understand this problem since I also once raised my dogs for more than ten years. Dogs have a different sleeping routine compared to humans in that they wake up at regular intervals during the night. When they wake up, they sometimes overreact to slight noise. Although it is an important matter of manners to keep one\'s pet from barking, we need to keep in mind that pet owners cannot always control their dogs. Nevertheless, barking that is too loud is an annoyance. If I suffer from severe disturbance, I will politely talk to my neighbor about dog issue. There could be several solutions, such as installing a soundproof wall. If many households live together in an apartment, you may consider requesting that your neighbor relocate their dog.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Actually, I can fully understand this problem since I also once raised my dogs for more than ten years.
>> Correct
Dogs have a different sleeping routine compared to humans in that they wake up at regular intervals during the night.
>> Correct
When they wake up, they sometimes overreact to slight noise.
>> When they wake up, they sometimes overreact to slight noises.
Although it is an important matter of manners to keep one\'s pet from barking, we need to keep in mind that pet owners cannot always control their dogs.
>> Correct
Nevertheless, barking that is too loud is an annoyance.
>> Correct
If I suffer from severe disturbance, I will politely talk to my neighbor about dog issue.
>> If I experience severe disturbance, I will politely talk to my neighbor about the dog issue.
There could be several solutions, such as installing a soundproof wall.
>> Correct
If many households live together in an apartment, you may consider requesting that your neighbor relocate their dog.
>> If many households share the same apartment building, you may consider politely asking your neighbor to relocate their dog.
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