What would you do if you were homeless
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ve never thought that I would be homeless, so I don’t know what should I do and how they are living. Maybe I should do something to earn money. But I know that it’s really hard to earn money and buy house. I don’t want that to happen to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Being homeless is a very hard situation. A lot of people around the world are experiencing this. We should learn how to value money and use it wisely to avoid being in this situation. So whenever you see a homeless person, try to give them help if you can :)
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I’ve never thought that I would be homeless, so I don’t know what should I do and how they are living.
>> I\'ve never thought about me being homeless so I don\'t know what I should do in that situation.
Maybe I should do something to earn money.
>>CORRECT
But I know that it’s really hard to earn money and buy house.
>> CORRECT
I don’t want that to happen to me.
>>CORRECT
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