What would you do, if you were on a desert island?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were on a desert island alone, I would make a schedule daily.
I think that everyday is very lonly for me, so I will be scheduling.
If I would have something to do everyday, I have hope.
Someday I may meet someone who can halp me.
And more, I will make a calendar to know what day is it today.
"Hope" would be the most important thing for me when I am lone.
강사 첨삭
If I were on a desert island alone, I would make a schedule daily.
>>I would make a daily schedule.I think that everyday is very lonly for me, so I will be scheduling.
>> I think I would feel lonely everyday if I won't do anything.
If I would have something to do everyday, I have hope.
>>it'll give me hope.Someday I may meet someone who can halp me. And more, I will make a calendar to know what day is it today. >>Someday, I might meet someone who can help me, and also, I will make a calender to know what day is it today. "Hope" would be the most important thing for me when I am lone.
>> .... when I am alone.
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