What would you do, if you were on a desert island alone?
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Actually, few months ago, I watched a famous film - "Get away" again.
While I watched it, I imagined about the life on an island alone.
Maybe it's hard to survive without any modern things.
There is no food, no water, no house, no clothes...
through these difficulties, the main charactor could survive for a couple of years. However, he finally decided to leave the island because of the loneliness.
The movie had a happy ending. But I don't think I can survive in that environment. Especially it's a desert island, there seems nothing I can use to make a boat.
All I can try is wait somebody's rescue and help.
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Actually, few months ago, I watched a famous film - \"Get away\" again.
>> CorrectWhile I watched it, I imagined about the life on an island alone.
>> Correct (or)
>> While I watched it, I imagined about the life staying on an island alone.Maybe it\'s hard to survive without any modern things.
>> CorrectThere is no food, no water, no house, no clothes...
>> Correctthrough these difficulties, the main charactor could survive for a couple of years.
>> Correct
However, he finally decided to leave the island because of the loneliness.
>> However, he finally decided to leave the island because of loneliness.The movie had a happy ending.
>> Correct
But I don\'t think I can survive in that environment.
>> Correct
Especially it\'s a desert island, there seems nothing I can use to make a boat.
>> CorrectAll I can try is wait somebody\'s rescue and help.
>> All I can try is to wait for somebody\'s rescue and help.
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