What would you do, if you were on a desert island alone?

AT first, if i were in this situation, i would be very nervous. because i have a few fear about new place. and i will accept my situation and try to find what to do for living in the island. Oh, i preper island to desert. because i like swiming in the sea and looking at coral. Anyway, I hope their is a lovely house, books, boat, equipments for fishing and diving, tool and dog. I would run along the beach with my dog every morning, and take a boat and go fishing. After lunch, i would pick up some fruits in the island. and then, I would take a rest reading a book, because the light of sun is very strong at noon.I would sometimes prepare barbeque party. At ningt, if the weather is good, no cloud, i would look at the stars and find signs laying the send. It is good imagination, isnt it? In fact, i want to quit my job and go traveling to the island or spot where there is few people. There is a lot of people in Seoul, Baguio city also. I wanna escape from the work and city, And you?

Hello [이름], This is long! I am impressed by your imagination. I never thought of it that way. Maybe for people wanting some peace would not mind this kind of situation but for others who are used to the city life would not like this. Well, I would like to live in an island too but not forever. I think I couldn't stand not having someone with me. I would like to escape some times but just for a few days only. Time for self reflection something like that. I would also love to have a house there. I think that would be great. Thank you for asking my opinion about this situation. See you tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are  your corrections: AT first, if i were in this situation, i would be very nervous. >>If I were in this situation, I would feel nervous at first. because i have a few fear about new place. >>Because I have a fear of new places. and i will accept my situation and try to find what to do for living in the island. >>I will eventually acept my situation and find things to do for living in an island. Oh, i preper island to desert. >>Oh, I prefer the island than the desert. because i like swiming in the sea and looking at coral. >>Correct! Anyway, I hope their is a lovely house, books, boat, equipments for fishing and diving, tool and dog. >>Anyway, I am hoping to have a lovely house, books, a boat, equipments for fishing and diving, tools and a dog. I would run along the beach with my dog every morning, and take a boat and go fishing. >>Correct! After lunch, i would pick up some fruits in the island. >>Correct! and then, I would take a rest reading a book, because the light of sun is very strong at noon. >>Then, I will take a rest and read a book because the light of the sun is strong during noontime. I would sometimes prepare barbeque party. >>I would prepare for barbeque party sometimes. At ningt, if the weather is good, no cloud, i would look at the stars and find signs laying the send. >>At night, if the weather is good, I would lay on the sand and look at the stars. It is good imagination, isnt it? >>It is a good imagination, isn't it? In fact, i want to quit my job and go traveling to the island or spot where there is few people. >>In fact, I want to quit my job and travel to a certain island where there are a few people. There is a lot of people in Seoul, Baguio city also. >>There are a lot of people in Seoul and Baguio City. I wanna escape from the work and city, And you? >>I wanna escape from the city and work. How about you?