What would you do if you were the president in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
When I was child, I had a dream to be a president.
I thought, my child time, the president was the King.
So I can do everything what I want and I can take all in my country. It was very childish thinking
Now, I think, the president is very important position to make a good country. A fault decision that the president make can be a dangerous situation for my country.
So I don\'t want to be a president. Only to be a general person.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
So I can do everything what I want and I can take all in my country.
Now, I think, the president is very important position to make a good country.
So I don\'t want to be a president. Only to be a general person.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name],
When I was child, I had a dream to be a president.
When I was child, I had a dream to be a president.
>> When I was a child, I dreamed to be a president.
I thought, my child time, the president was the King.
>> When I was a child, I thought the president is a King.
So I can do everything what I want and I can take all in my country.
>> So I can do everything that I want and I can take all in my country.
It was very childish thinking
>> CORRECT!
Now, I think, the president is very important position to make a good country.
>> Now, I think, being a president is a very important position to make a good country.
A fault decision that the president make can be a dangerous situation for my country.
>> A fault decision that the president makes can be a dangerous situation for my country.
So I don\'t want to be a president. Only to be a general person.
>> So I don\'t want to be a president. I just want to be a regular person.
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