What would you do if you were the richest person in the world? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have a lot of money I want to help the peoples that are hard to go company.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
I\'m pretty interested in what you wrote here.
It raises a lot of questions.
Let\'s talk more about it in class.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I have a lot of money I want to help the peoples that are hard to go company.
>> If I have a lot of money, I want to help the people who are having a hard time working in companies.
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