What would you do if you where homeless?

2021-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I am homeless, there are two ways to find the home. First, if I am homeless because of money, I will save my money. And if I get lots of money, I will buy home with my money. Second, if I lose my way so I am homeless, I will call to 112. And they will help me to find my home. But if I have to be homeless in real, I will wish my situation is second. Because I don\'t want to have no money.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Being homeless is a very hard situation. A lot of people around the world are experiencing this. We should learn how to value money and use it wisely to avoid being in this situation. So whenever you see a homeless person, try to give them help if you can :)

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If I am homeless, there are two ways to find the home.

>> If I am homeless, there would be two ways for me to find a home.

First, if I am homeless because of money, I will save my money.

>> CORRECT

And if I get lots of money, I will buy home with my money.

>>And if I get lots of money, I will buy a house with it.

Second, if I lose my way so I am homeless, I will call to 112.

>>Second, if I am homeless because I am lost, I will call 112.

And they will help me to find my home.

>> They will help me find my way home.

But if I have to be homeless in real, I will wish my situation is second.

>> If this is true, I want to be in the second situation because I don\'t want to have no money.

Because I don\'t want to have no money.

>>CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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