What would you do if you won 600 million in the lottery?
학생이 쓴 원문
l will buy apartment ,car,and live the high life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
T[이름]k you for writing your homework. However, I would suggest that you focus on expanding your ideas a bit more.. Try to expound your ideas, in that way, you can check how high your vocabulary is and refine your sentence construction skills. Please do that next time. Have a great day!
T. Aki~
l will buy apartment ,car,and live the high life.
>> I will buy an apartment, a car and live a luxurious life.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.