What would you do if you won the lottery?

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

First, I will go to the nice restaurant and have a nice dinner. 

>> First, I will go to a nice restaurant and have a nice dinner. 

Second, I will buy a mouse that I wanted before. 

>> Second, I will buy a mouse that I wanted to have before. 

Third, I will go to seoul to buy a nice clothes. 

>> Third, I will go to Seoul to buy nice clothes. 

I will also use some money on game what I want, because my mom doesn\'t let me to use money on game because my mom doesn\'t think that game is that important.

>> I will also spend some money on games that I want because my mom doesn\'t let me spend money on games.

because my mom doesn\'t think that game is that important.

>> Also because my mom doesn\'t think that games are that important.