What would you do if you won the lottery?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have never bought a lottery ticket or have ever considered winning.
If I win, I want to sprinkle a bunch of money.
I will go a lot of people.
I climb high and sprinkle money.
There will be a lot of people who can be lucky, and some people will not be lucky.
I don\'t earn money by trying, so I\'d like to sprinkle it in a good way to spend it with many people.
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Hello Miss. [Name]! I think that you are very generous. Your idea is unique and selfless. I am smiling while I was reading your essay. ~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
If I win, I want to sprinkle a bunch of money.
If I win, I want to sprinkle a bunch of money.
>>If I win, I want to giveaway a bunch of money.
I will go a lot of people.
I will go a lot of people.
>>I will give it to a lot of people.
I climb high and sprinkle money.
I climb high and sprinkle money.
>>I will climb a high place and I will sprinkle money.
There will be a lot of people who can be lucky, and some people will not be lucky.
There will be a lot of people who can be lucky, and some people will not be lucky.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t earn money by trying, so I\'d like to sprinkle it in a good way to spend it with many people.
I don\'t earn money by trying, so I\'d like to sprinkle it in a good way to spend it with many people.
>>I didn\'t earn the money by working hard so I\'d like to just give it away so that many people can spend it.
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