what would you do to prevent school violence?
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If I were a school teacher, I would have an extended classes after all regular class finish in an effort to give students, who have trouble and hostility for each other, fair duel. It would be a great chance to resolve their problems by fighting, arguing formally in front of classmates as long as I am the one who mediate between them with justice.
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Hi there again,
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Have a great day! See you in the class.
Verna
If I were a school teacher, I would have an extended classes after all regular class finish in an effort to give students, who have trouble and hostility for each other, fair duel.
>>If I were a school teacher, I would extend time after all regular classes will finish in an effort to give students who have trouble and hostility for each other fair duel.
It would be a great chance to resolve their problems by fighting, arguing formally in front of classmates as long as I am the one who mediate between them with justice.
>> It would be a great chance to resolve their problems by fighting, arguing formally in front of their classmates as long as I am the one who mediate between them with justice.
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