What would you invent if you were a scientist? Why?
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Modern century people are living very convenient life style.
>>> Modern century people are now living a very convenient lifestyle.
Wealthy families life are unbelievable easy and comfortable in Korea.
>>> Wealthy families are unbelievably living an easy and comfortable life in Korea.
For example, inside house the most systems are touching one button that everything it works.
>>> For example, inside the house, most system are now operating with a touch of one button.
Vacummming, cooking, door on and off, watching TV,curtains, car, laundry, dish wash .
>>>Vacuuming, cooking, opening, and closing of doors, watching TV, curtains, cars, laundry, washing of dishes are some of the examples.
Everybody knows Sam Sung electronic company in Korea.
>>>Everybody knows Samsung electronics company in Korea.
The Sam Sung made so many amazing items.
>>> Samsung made many amazing items.
I am t[이름]kful all over the world many scientists.
>>> I am t[이름]kful for all the scientists around the world.
Generations to generations many scientists efforts and their hard work paid off.
>>> From one generation to another, many scientists made efforts and their hard work paid off.
Especially a Nobel prize is a amazing too.
>>> Most especially the people who won Noble prizes were amazing.
It c[이름]ged on earth many ways.
>>> It c[이름]ged the earth in so many ways.
If I am inventing now specific transportation above the street.
>>> If I were to invent something, I would invent a specific transportation above the street.
Many countries got traffic issues.
>>> Many countries have traffic issues.
It is a great idea also people love it.
>>> It is a great idea and people will love it.
Many people are saving energy, time, also better air qualities.
>>> Many people are saving energy, time and they also want a better quality of air.
If I describe my item looks like hot air balloon style.
>>> If I were to describe the item it would look like a hot air balloon.
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