What would you like people to remember or think about you when they hear your name? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want my name to be remained as a memorable person to peoples.
and other people may think like me.
Remaining my famous name needs long time and many social activities to people and should be fair game.
It is applied all of area . for example, culture, entertainment , social, medical and etc
But above all, Being a respective person from my family is the first and best one what i leave. I think.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Jack!
Thank you for submitting your answer about my question.
I truly admire your answer about it.
As for me, I want my name to be remembered as a good person.
I think, I will be very happy with that. ^^
Anyway, regarding your last sentence, you used the term \'respective\'.
I was actually thinking that you might mean, \' a respected person\'.
Both words are actually adjectives so they are fine. Just in case, I\'ll share the meanings of both. ^^
*respective - relevant ;
- It could also mean \'particular or specific\'. For example: They have their respective classes. (They have their specific classes.)
* respected- admired ; honored; beloved
Also, for \'people\', it is already considered plural so you don\'t have to add -s.
For the third sentence, \" It needs a long time, many social activities with people and it should be a fair game for my famous name to remain.\" Or: \"It needs a long time, many social activities with people and it should be a fair game for retaining my famous name.\"
I changed the order of the words from the one you made and added preposition \'for\' towards the end just before your goal or what you want to happen as mentioned in the sentence. ^^ That\'s to clearly indicate that the steps you mentioned are the things needed to have your name remained or retained. ^^
I hope these notes will help. ^^ Always take care!
~Teacher Gina
>> I want my name to be remained as a memorable person to people.
>> Or: I want my name to remain as a memorable person to people.
>> Or: I want my name to be remembered as a memorable person to people.
and other people may think like me.
and other people may think like me.
>> CORRECT.
Remaining my famous name needs long time and many social activities to people and should be fair game.
Remaining my famous name needs long time and many social activities to people and should be fair game.
>> It needs a long time, many social activities with people and it should be a fair game for my famous name to remain.
>> Or: It needs a long time, many social activities with people and it should be a fair game for retaining my famous name.
It is applied all of area . for example, culture, entertainment , social, medical and etc
>> It is applied in all areas. For example, culture, entertainment, social, medical and etc.
But above all, Being a respective person from my family is the first and best one what i leave. I think.
>> But above all, I think being a respective person from my family is the first and the best one which I want to leave.
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