What would you like to achieve in studying English?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, I am interested in AI(Artificial intelligence). When I search information about AI, There are lots of information in English. Of course, I can find information in Korean, but English Information are more usable. That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go a trip to oversea countries. My mother will retire in next year. After her retirement, I want to go on a vacation with my parents to other countries. My parents have an experience visiting China by package program. In my case, package trip is not good. So. I want to supply nice service to my parents.
강사 첨삭
These days, I am interested in AI(Artificial intelligence).
>> Correct.
When I search information about AI, There are lots of information in English.
>> When I search for information about AI, there are a lot of information in English.
Of course, I can find information in Korean, but English Information are more usable.
>> Of course, I can find information in Korean, but the English Information is more usable.
That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go a trip to oversea countries.
>> That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go on a trip to overseas countries.
My mother will retire in next year.
>> My mother will retire next year.
After her retirement, I want to go on a vacation with my parents to other countries.
>> Correct.
My My parents have an experience visiting China by package program. parents have an experience visiting China by package program.
>> My parents have experience visiting China through a tourist package trip.
In my case, package trip is not good.
>> In my case, a tourist package trip is not good.
So. I want to supply nice service to my parents.
>> So, I want to let my parents feel and enjoy the trip without being frugal about it.
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