What would you like to achieve in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have no special achievement in my life now.
I feel that the word achievement is too much pressure to me.
I will continue to do something what I want to do.
I \'d like to publish my third book in next time about parents education.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the homework question!
Have a nice weekend and talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
What would you like to achieve in your life?I have no special achievement in my life now.
CORRECT!
or>>I haven\'t achieved anything in my life as of now.
I feel that the word achievement is too much pressure to me.
I feel that the word achievement is too much pressure to me.
>>I feel that the word \"achievement\" is giving me too much pressure.
I will continue to do something what I want to do.
I will continue to do something what I want to do.
>>I will continue to do something that I want.
I \'d like to publish my third book in next time about parents education.
I \'d like to publish my third book in next time about parents education.
>>I \'d like to publish my third book next time, which is about parents\' education.
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