What would you like to acquire in life? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to acquire skill of drawing or play the music instruments.
Because, if I have certain artistic skill I could enjoy my life more variety.
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~ Teacher Gina
I would like to acquire skill of drawing or play the music instruments.
>> I would like to acquire the skill of drawing or playing musical instruments.
Because, if I have certain artistic skill I could enjoy my life more variety.>> Because if I have a certain artistic skill, I could enjoy my life with more variety.
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