What would you like to be most remembered for at your current company and why?

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Actually, I can say that you are really a good person.

It is difficult to find someone like you.

I can talk more about my opinion in class.

You did a good job with your essay but be careful with the words you use and word order.  See you.

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I want to the one who remembered as \"good one\".

>> I want to be the one who can be remembered as a \"good one\".

>> Better: I want to be remembered as a good person.
As most people want to be good as I do.

>> Did you mean: Like most of the people want to be good and I do too.
In short, Guaranteed one is my goal.

>> Did you mean: In short, I can guarantee that trait it is one of my goal.

>> OR: In short, being a good person is my goal.
an word is powerful when words gather and make sentence, It affect more powerful.

>> Did you mean: When words are gathered to make a sentence, it becomes more powerful.
when a senior officers talk positive about me, that sentence go around and
finally arrive another person.

>> When a senior officer says positive things about me, that will be known by the other people.
First impression is important, that is made by word and sentences.
>> First impression is important. It is made of words and sentences.

So remembered as a good person is thought as simple thing but it is not.

>> Did you mean: Being remembered as a good person is not just simple thing.
It is titled after many tries.

>> Did you mean: It is just a title but it takes a lot of courage and attitude.

I want to be a that kind of person

>> Correct!