What would you like to change about the education system of your country?

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This is a very challenging way to deal with education, right? Please take note of the corrections below. You were great, keep your compositions coming!

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What would you like to change about the education system of your country?
>>> Correct!
In my country, when I was high school student, School forced to students to study until 11:00 o\'clock at school. 

>>> In my country, when I was a high school student, schools forced students to study until 11:00 o\'clock in the evening at school.

I didn\'t understand why school forced to do it to all students until late.

>>> I didn\'t understand why schools forced students to do it until late.

After the class, I wanted to study outside of school, but I couldn\'t.

>>> I wanted to study outside the school, but I couldn\'t.

The school was enfored. They wanted us to study only in school.

>>> The school was forcing us to just study in school.

I think it can make students stressful.. it needs to be changed!

>>> I think it can make the students become stressed, so it needs to be changed!

>> OR: I think it will be very stressful for the students, so it needs to be changed!