What would you like to change in the education system in South Korea and why?
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What would you like to change in the education system in South Korea and why?
The education system in our country has been changed when I went to school.
The purpose of education gets into college in the past.
Nowadays, educations are improved active class.
South Korea\'s education policies still go along with the college admission system.
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The students in South Korea are very competitive there\'s no doubt. Although, children have to undergo a lot of things to come this far.
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-Teacher EliseThe education system in our country has been changed when I went to school.
>> The education system in our country has been changed since I went to school.
The purpose of education gets into college in the past.
>> The purpose of education is to get kinds into college in the past.
Nowadays, educations are improved active class.
>> Nowadays, education is improve to make classes actively.
South Korea\'s education policies still go along with the college admission system.
>>CORRECT
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