What would you like to do instead of learning English?

Firstly, I'd like to learn English for speaking more precisely and polishly. I don't know when I finish this learning English but maybe, it will be continued until the time I can do it. In addition, I'm also learning playing Clarinet even though I couldn't do it when I was in japan for last 4 years. I started the lesson for clarunet from March this year. This is also very interesting to me. So, I'd like to do both of them together not instead of learning English..

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ESSAY QUESTION: What would you like to do instead of learning English?

Firstly, I\'d like to learn English for speaking more precisely and polishly.

>>Firstly, I\'d like to learn English so I can speak more precisely and in a more polished way.

I don\'t know when I finish this learning English.

>>I don\'t know when I will finish learning English.

or>>I don\'t know when this English lessons will end.

but maybe, it will be continued until the time I can do it.

>>But maybe, it will be continue until the time I can still do it.

In addition, I\'m also learning playing Clarinet even though I couldn\'t do it when I was in japan for last 4 years.

>>In addition, I\'m also learning the clarinet even though I couldn\'t do it when I was in japan for the last 4 years.

I started the lesson for clarunet from March this year.

>>I started the lessons in clarinet since March of this year.

or>>I started taking clarinet lessons since March of this year.

This is also very interesting to me.

CORRECT!

or>>Also, I find it very interesting.

So, I\'d like to do both of them together not instead of learning English..

>>So, I\'d like to do both of them together instead of just learning English.