What would you like to do instead of learning English?
학생이 쓴 원문
If this question suppose the situation that I am very fluent in English, I wouldn\'t be going to study any language. In fact, I don\'t like learning new language. -I\'m not sure of this, but I suppose so.. This is largely because I think I don\'t have much talent to learning language. I am just trying hard to learn the English since I have to do that for my future dream. Because I don\'t have any talent to the language, I will rather put my effort into something excluding the language. I will read more books about my interest field, or learn the way to playing the instruments.
But If I have talent to learn new languages, I would learn Spainish. Because it is a almost third most populous language in the world. Excuding the English, there is a \'chinise\' as a famous and practical language. But I know that there are too much chinise writing that I have to memorize. So considering the practicality, Spanish would be a best choice.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Spanish is indeed a good language. Did you know that my country was colonized by Spain for more than 300 years in the past? So a big part of our culture, including our language, is highly influenced by Spain. We count int he Spanish way. Uno, dos, tres....
- T. Beth
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If this question suppose the situation that I am very fluent in English, I wouldn\'t be going to study any language. >>> OR: If this question is talking about the situation where I am very fluent in English, I wouldn\'t be going to study any other language.
In fact, I don\'t like learning new language. -
>>> correct
I\'m not sure of this, but I suppose so..
>>> correct
This is largely because I think I don\'t have much talent to learning language.
>>> This is largely because I think I don\'t have much talent in learning language.
I am just trying hard to learn the English since I have to do that for my future dream.
>>> I am just trying hard to learn English since I have to do that for my future dream.
Because I don\'t have any talent to the language, I will rather put my effort into something excluding the language.
>>> Because I don\'t have any talent on languages, I would rather put my effort into something excluding learning language.
I will read more books about my interest field, or learn the way to playing the instruments.
>>> OR: I will read more books about my interest field, or learn how to play musical instruments.
But If I have talent to learn new languages, I would learn Spainish.
>>> But If I have the talent to learn new languages, I would learn Spanish.
Because it is a almost third most populous language in the world.
>>> Because it is almost the third most populous language in the world.
Excuding the English, there is a \'chinise\' as a famous and practical language.
>>> Aside from English, there is \'Chinese\' which is a famous and practical language.
But I know that there are too much chinise writing that I have to memorize.
>>> But I know that there are too much Chinese characters that I have to memorize.
So considering the practicality, Spanish would be a best choice.
>>> So considering the practicality, Spanish would be the best choice.
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