What would you like to get this Christmas?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
I hope your visa gets approved! ^^
In class I hope you can tell me more about why you want to immigrate to the US.
Thank you for sending your composition.
Your sentences are improving quite well and corrections are becoming more minimal with each composition.
I am happy because of that. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I submitted an application for immigration visa to USCIS in early June.
>> I submitted an application for an immigration visa to USCIS in early June this year.
People say that there would be an announcement in six months.
>> People say that there would be an announcement after six months.
So I’d like to get an approving announcement from USCIS this Christmas.
>> CORRECT!
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