What would you like to know about your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you like to know about your country?
Our country is divided into the eight province of our country. So I`d like to know about the local and people`s character of the regions each province. There are a little bit different from each provinces.
When is the best time to visit your place?
If someone want to visit my place to talk me. I always have discussed with my wife when it`s the best time.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!
What would you like to know about your country?
Our country is divided into the eight province of our country.
Our country is divided into the eight province of our country.
>>> Our country is divided into eight provinces.
So I`d like to know about the local and people`s character of the regions each province.
>>> OR: So I`d like to know about the local and people`s character in each province.
There are a little bit different from each provinces.
>>> There are a little bit of differences from each provinces.
>>> There are a little bit of differences from each provinces.
When is the best time to visit your place?
If someone want to visit my place to talk me. I always have discussed with my wife when it`s the best time.
If someone want to visit my place to talk me. I always have discussed with my wife when it`s the best time.
>>> If someone wants to visit my place to talk me, I always discuss it with my wife when it`s the best time.
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