What would you like to see when you visit a park?
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I live in Asan . There is The Lake slnjeong
It is a lage lake, Beutiflul flowers. varilous aninmals and The cafes
Many people always go for a walk to the road surroundding lakes everyday with their dog
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>> CORRECT.
There is The Lake slnjeong
>> There is the lake Sinjeong.
It is a lage lake, Beutiflul flowers. varilous aninmals and The cafes
It is a lage lake, Beutiflul flowers. varilous aninmals and The cafes
>> There is a large lake, beautiful flowers, various animals and cafes.
Many people always go for a walk to the road surroundding lakes everyday with their dog
Many people always go for a walk to the road surroundding lakes everyday with their dog
>> Many people always go for a walk everyday on the road surrounding the lake with their dog.
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