What would you like toaccomplish this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
In this year, I really want to find my job.
Until now I can't choose my job.
Of course I have been worried about my job.
But I can't choose my job.
10years ago I wanted to be a pilot but when I aged 19 years old I want to be a airplane engineer. and after 2years later I wanted to be a helicopter pilot.
Now I am thinking the airplane engineer to my job.
I don't kvow when my job will be changed.
I am worring because I'm a second year student.
So I should choose my job. Thereafter I can have my pupose.
So I was determine that I will choose my job before June.
강사 첨삭
GOOD MORNING, VINCENT!
Thank you so much for finding some time to answer your homework.
I really hope that you can achieve your goals this year.
Do your best! Take care!
In this year, I really want to find my job.
>>This year, I really want to find a job.Until now I can\'t choose my job.
>>Until now, I can\'t choose a job for me.Of course I have been worried about my job.
>>CORRECT!But I can\'t choose my job.
>>But I can\'t choose a job for me.10years ago I wanted to be a pilot but when I aged 19 years old I want to be a airplane engineer.
>>10 years ago, I wanted to become a pilot but when I turned 19, I wanted to become an airplance engineer.
and after 2years later I wanted to be a helicopter pilot.
>>2 years later, I wanted to become a helicopter pilot.Now I am thinking the airplane engineer to my job.
>>Now I am thinking I should work as an aeronautic engineer as a career.I don\'t kvow when my job will be changed.
>>I don\'t know when I will change my job.I am worring because I\'m a second year student.
>>I\'m worried because I\'m a second year student.So I should choose my job. Thereafter I can have my pupose.
>>I should choose a job so I can have a purpose.So I was determine that I will choose my job before June. >>I am determined that I can choose a job before June.
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