What would you most like to learn?(ANSWEE)

2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I want to learn Science the most. Because my favorite subject is Science, and my dream is being a Scientist. Science is very hard subject, but it is very interesting. I like experiment the most. I like experiences about Science. Now I\'m interested about Space, and also I want to research Space!

강사 첨삭

 

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

What would you most like to learn?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I want to learn Science the most.
Because my favorite subject is Science, and my dream is being a Scientist.
Science is very hard subject, but it is very interesting.
I like experiment the most. I like experiences about Science.
Now I\'m interested about Space, and also I want to research Space!

 

CORRECTIONS:

I want to learn science the most.
My favorite subject is science, and my dream is to become a Scientist.
Science is
a very hard subject, but it is very interesting.
I like
experimentation the most. I like experiences about science.
Now
, I\'m interested about space, and also, I want to research about space!

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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