What would you most like to learn?(ANSWEE)
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What would you most like to learn?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I want to learn Science the
most.
Because my favorite subject is Science, and my dream is being a Scientist.
Science is very hard subject, but it is very interesting.
I like experiment the most. I like experiences about Science.
Now I\'m interested about Space, and also I want to research Space!
CORRECTIONS:
I want to learn science the most.
My favorite subject is science, and my dream is to become a
Scientist.
Science is a very hard subject, but it is very
interesting.
I like experimentation the most. I like experiences about science.
Now, I\'m interested about space, and also, I want to research about space!
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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