What would you need to do to be happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think happiness does not require much. The standard of happiness varies each person. Someone needs a lot of money to spend. And someone needs a few thing for happiness. This is a difference in attitude about happiness. So, for happy life, we should think more positive. That is an important thing.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U!
Definitely! I totally agree with you!
Definitely! I totally agree with you!
Genuine happiness comes from being simple and content. :)
You did great in writing your homework!!
Have a great day and see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel ^^
I think happiness does not require much.
>> Correct!
The standard of happiness varies each person.
>> Correct!
OR: Each person\'s definition of happiness is unique.
OR: Each person\'s definition of happiness is unique.
Someone needs a lot of money to spend.
>> Correct!
And someone needs a few thing for happiness.
>> Correct!
This is a difference in attitude about happiness.
>> This reflects a difference in outlook on happiness.
So, for happy life, we should think more positive.
>> So, in order to live a happy life, we should think more positively.
That is an important thing.
>> Correct!
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