What would you never lend anyone?

2020-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

I never lend anyone that is my flute. There are many reasons. Flute is a wind instrument, related to personal hygiene and a sensitive instrument. Also it is expensive. I think that it is impolite to ask for lending for other\'s expensive instrument.

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Hi [이름],
Thank you for your ideas today!
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Teacher ELLY.
What would you never lend anyone?
I never lend anyone that is my flute.
>>I never lend my flute to anyone.
There are many reasons.
CORRECT!
or>>There are a lot of reasons.
Flute is a wind instrument, related to personal hygiene and a sensitive instrument.
>>The flute is a wind instrument, that can be related to a person\'s personal hygiene. It is also a sensitive instrument.
Also, it is expensive.
CORRECT!
or>>And, it is prices.
I think that it is impolite to ask for lending for other\'s expensive instrument.
>>I think that it is impolite to ask for someone to borrow their expensive instrument.

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