What would you recommend to someone you know who is under stress?
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Good day Sir [이름]. ^^
How are you today?
Did you have a great day? I hope you did.
Stress is really one of the big challenges we, people, encounter.
We need to find ways in order to release it.
Enjoy your day tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
Stress is an unpleasant fact of life.
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We all experience it for various reasons, and we all try to come up with ways of coping with it some with more success than others.
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Life can be stressful; sometimes we have to deal with ongoing stress positively.
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Stress can have a variety of causes such as family problems, job problems, financial difficulties, poor health, or even the death of someone close to us.
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It is very hard to recommend or advice anyone who is under pressure, because when we are not in the same pressure, we can never feel it exactly as the person feels.
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But there are some commons ways that many people used to when under pressure.
>> But there are some common ways that many people are used to when under pressure.
We can think about the positive things we can get from this pressure.
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We can find some funny things that can break this pressure.
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We can find someone who can share with me this pressure.
>> We can find someone who can share this pressure with me.
Among others things, the most effective way to exercise.
>> Among the others things, the most effective way is to exercise.
Drinking could be one of the ways, but excessive drinking will only do you harm.
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