What would you say are the most popular drinks in your country? Please explain your answer.

2019-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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One of the most popular drinks in Korea is Vita 500. It is a kind of soda that contains much vitamin C. People like it because it is healthy. It is considered to be good for overcoming fatigue. When I go to the convenience store, I usually pick choose this drink. Also, it is especially good for people who are sensitive to caffeine because it doesn\'t contain any caffeine. For these reasons, Vita 500 is very famous in Korea.

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Good evening^^

Thank you for doing your homework!

wow, I think I should try this drink because I am in need of Vitamin C!

One of the most popular drinks in Korea is Vita 500.
>>CORRECT!
OR: One of the most popular beverages in Korea is the Vita 500.
It is a kind of soda that contains much vitamin C.
>>It is a type of soda that is high in vitamin C.
People like it because it is healthy.
>>CORRECT!
It is considered to be good for overcoming fatigue.
>>CORRECT!
When I go to the convenience store, I usually pick choose this drink.
>>I usually pick this drink when I go to the convenience store.
Also, it is especially good for people who are sensitive to caffeine because it doesn\'t contain any caffeine.
>>CORRECT!
For these reasons, Vita 500 is very famous in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
OR: For this reason, the Vita 500 is very popular in Korea.

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