What would you say is the best thing about getting older? Why?
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Sometimes I miss when I was young, but I don\'t want to go back that time. I\'m really satisfied now.
Because by getting older, I can make more money and think more about my future. And It can be able to develop myself.
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Yes, it\'s good to grow old with good plans^^
Sometimes I miss when I was young, but I don\'t want to go back that time.
>>> Sometimes I miss being young, but I don\'t want to go back.
I\'m really satisfied now.
>>> CORRECT!
Because by getting older, I can make more money and think more about my future.
>>> Because I can earn more money and think more about the future by getting older.
And It can be able to develop myself.
>>> And it can improve me.
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