What would you tell an extreme vegetarian/vegan to try and convince him or her to eat meat or other
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Meat contains protein which is essential your body. Protein is one of essential nutrients and is good for your health. Try to eat poultry(chicken, duck) rather than beef, pork, or lamb. If you don’t want to eat meat, just try to eat egg. That will be enough for you.
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1. Meat contains protein which is essential your body.
>>Meat contains protein which is essential to your body.
2. Protein is one of the essential nutrients and is good for your health.
>>CORRECT!
3. Try to eat poultry(chicken, duck) rather than beef, pork, or lamb.
>>CORRECT!
4. If you don’t want to eat meat, just try to eat egg.
>>CORRECT!
5. That will be enough for you.
>>CORRECT!
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