What would you wish for if you saw a falling star?

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

If I see a falling star, I tell the star that I want.

>> If I see a falling star, I will tell the star what I want.
My wish is a having a lot of money and having a health of my family.

>> My wish is to have a lot of money and good health for my family.