What would you wish for if you were given three (3) wishes by a genie? Why?
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First this is I have my apartment. Becuase, in korea the price of house grow repidly and many people feel frustrated because of this price.
Second, I will be a english master. Because, what I want to the most is english skills.
Finally, the thing what I want is end of COVID-19. All people in the world have same think with me.
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Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
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First this is I have my apartment.
>>> First, I\'d wish to have my own apartment.
Becuase, in korea the price of house grow repidly and many people feel frustrated because of this price.
>>> It\'s because in Korea, the price of houses increases rapidly and many people are already frustrated.
Second, I will be a english master.
Second, I will be a english master.
>>> Second, I\'d wish to be fluent in English.
Because, what I want to the most is english skills.
>>> What I want the most is to improve my English skills.
Finally, the thing what I want is end of COVID-19. All people in the world have same think with me.
Finally, the thing what I want is end of COVID-19. All people in the world have same think with me.
>>> Last, I\'d wish for Covid-19 to be gone. All people in the world probably wish for this.
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