What would your biggest fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
All the subject what you gave to me were very interested because it made me really thought about myself. I think that my biggest fear is my husband\'s heath. He\'s not a healthy person so he can get sick so easily. We don\'t have any kid. We only have each other so I hope that we can get old together in good health until we finish our life. I know that as long as my husband and I are healthy then we can do anything and nothing can make us fear to do.
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Good evening, [이름]!^^
I\'m happy to know that you\'re interested in all of my essay questions to you. I will try my best to continue giving you interesting questions. ^_^
All the subject what you gave to me were very interested because it made me really thought about myself.
>>>All the subjects that you gave to me were very interesting because it made me really think about myself.
He\'s not a healthy person so he can get sick so easily.
>>> He\'s not a healthy person, so he can get sick very easily.
We only have each other so I hope that we can get old together in good health until we finish our life.
>>>We only have each other, so I hope that we can get old together with good health until we die.
I know that as long as my husband and I are healthy then we can do anything and nothing can make us fear to do.
>>> I know that as long as my husband and I are healthy, then we can do anything and nothing can make us fear to do things.
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