What would your perfect weekend look like?
학생이 쓴 원문
Just Imagining about it makes me happy.
I want to lie down on my bed all day without worries. The night before, I never set the alarm clock and go to bed. I want to wake up when my eyes are opened. Then I\'ll take my phone and scroll up to see SNS post. I usually see X(Twitter) which is the platform that are various kinds of topics. Once I click it, I spend time about 1-3hours. Anyway the time to be hungry and it is perfect weekend so let\'s suppose I\'m not on a diet.. I\'ll eat anything what I want. And then blood sugar rises(AKA blood sugar spike?), I\'ll fall asleep easily. When I awake from sleep, I\'ll repeat this routine. I take my phone, contact my friends, and watch youtube. It\'s perfect weekend what I want now. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sunny! It sounds like a very relaxing weekend. This seems like my ideal weekend, too. Resting and relaxing at home without anything to worry about sounds perfect. ^^ I wish we could have more weekends like this. Haha. Thank you for doing your homework!~ See you in class!
~T. Jewel
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Just Imagining about it makes me happy.
>>Just imagining it makes me happy.
I want to lie down on my bed all day without worries.
>>I want to lie down in bed all day without any worries.
The night before, I never set the alarm clock and go to bed.
>>I never set my alarm the night before and just go to bed.
I want to wake up when my eyes are opened.
>>I want to wake up naturally.
Then I\'ll take my phone and scroll up to see SNS post.
>>Then I’ll pick up my phone and scroll through SNS posts.
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>>Then I’ll grab my phone and look at social media.
I usually see X(Twitter) which is the platform that are various kinds of topics.
>>I usually use X (Twitter), which is a platform with all kinds of topics.
Once I click it, I spend time about 1-3hours.
>>Once I click it, I spend about 1–3 hours on it.
Anyway the time to be hungry and it is perfect weekend so let\'s suppose I\'m not on a diet.
>>Anyway, it’s about time to eat, and it’s the perfect weekend, so let’s pretend I’m not on a diet.
I\'ll eat anything what I want. And then blood sugar rises(AKA blood sugar spike?),
>>I’ll eat whatever I want until my blood sugar rises.
I\'ll fall asleep easily.
>>CORECT
When I awake from sleep, I\'ll repeat this routine.
>>When I wake up, I’ll repeat this routine.
I take my phone, contact my friends, and watch youtube.
>>I grab my phone, chat with my friends, and watch YouTube videos.
It\'s perfect weekend what I want now. ^^
>>This is the perfect weekend for me. ^^
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