What writing skills do you need to be able to write well?
학생이 쓴 원문
I need a writing skill which write without much strength because I always write with much strength. So, I often lose my strength for writing easily. For example, in the situation which I have to take a writing exam, I have to write sentences quickly but I can\'t write quickly because of my writing habits. To solve these problems, I need a writing skill which write without much strength. I hope that I can improve my writing skills.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Kimberly!
I appreciate your homework submission. Thank you for being a diligent student ^^
When I was young student, I used to write with too much pressure, too. Not only I didn\'t write fast enough, but my handwriting looked messy. I realized that I need to improve my pen grasp and put light pressure in my writing. Maybe you can try these tips, too!
In your writing, do not be afraid to use the best synonyms of the words to rephrase your sentences. It will make your point clearer =)
See you in class later!
~ Teacher Gela
>> I need a writing skill that writes without much strength because I always write with much pressure.
So, I often lose my strength for writing easily.
>> So, I often lose my strength in writing easily.
For example, in the situation which I have to take a writing exam, I have to write sentences quickly but I can\'t write quickly because of my writing habits.
>> For example, in a situation where I have to take a writing exam, I have to write sentences quickly, but I can\'t write fast because of my writing habits.
To solve these problems, I need a writing skill which write without much strength.
>> To solve these problems, I need writing skills without much strength.
OR >> To solve these problems, I need writing skills with better body control and pencil grasp.
I hope that I can improve my writing skills.
>> CORRECT
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