What year do you want to visit if you have a Time Machine and why?
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I want to visit 2077 if I have Time Machine to go to future. It is because there is a game I’ve been playing named ‘Cyberpunk 2077’, and in this game, Korea is like super future city where is flying cars so I really want to go to 2077year and see if it is reality. I also want to make sure how develop science technology in 2077year.
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I want to visit 2077 if I have Time Machine to go to future. It is
because there is a game I’ve been playing named ‘Cyberpunk 2077’, and
in this game, Korea is like super future city where is flying cars so I
really want to go to 2077year and see if it is reality. I also want to
make sure how develop science technology in 2077year.
>> I want to visit year 2077 if I have a Time Machine to go to the future. It is
because there is a game I’ve been playing named ‘Cyberpunk 2077’, and
in this game, Korea is like a super future city where cars are flying and so I
really want to go to the year 2077 and see if it is a reality. I also want to
make sure how developed science technology is in the year 2077.
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