What you would do if you had a million dollars?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had a million dollars, I would travel all over Europe leisurely.
Because I really have wanted to go to Europe since I was young.
And I would buy everything I have wanted to buy.
And I will give my parents and my brother a hundred thousand dollars.
Lastly, I will save the rest of the money.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because I really have wanted to go to Europe since I was young.
And I would buy everything I have wanted to buy.
And I will give my parents and my brother a hundred thousand dollars.
Lastly, I will save the rest of the money.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
If I had a million dollars, I would travel all over Europe leisurely.
>> CORRECT!
Because I really have wanted to go to Europe since I was young.
>> Because I really wanted to go to Europe since I was young.
And I would buy everything I have wanted to buy.
>> CORRECT!
And I will give my parents and my brother a hundred thousand dollars.
>> CORRECT!
Lastly, I will save the rest of the money.
>> CORRECT!
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