What your original plans?
학생이 쓴 원문
백두 Mt. is located in the frontier of China and North Korea.
If it was sunny day there,
we was planning to see the volcanic lake at the top of Baekdu Mt
(=heavenly lake)
에고
My English skill is getting worse and worse.ㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
백두 Mt. is located in the frontier of China and North Korea.
>> Mountain 백두 is located in the boarder line between China and North Korea.
If it was sunny day there,
>> If it will be sunny there,
we was planning to see the volcanic lake at the top of Baekdu Mt
(=heavenly lake)
>> We were planning to see the volcanic lake at the top of 백두 Mountain.
에고
My English skill is getting worse and worse.ㅠㅠ
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