whatis your dream house?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to have a house with a garden.
The reason is that I can eat barbecue in the garden also grow plants.
additionally, I want to live in an eco-friendly house away from the city.
hmm,,,I can have my dream house in 30 years from now.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Sheila
I want to have a house with a garden.
>>CORRECT
The reason is that I can eat barbecue in the garden also grow plants.
>>The reason is that I can eat barbecue in the garden as well as grow plants.
additionally, I want to live in an eco-friendly house away from the city.
>>CORRECT
I can have my dream house in 30 years from now.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I can have my dream house 30 years later.
Thank you!
>>You\'re welcome. :)
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