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2019-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I was young, I would eat meal evenly every day. On weekends, I would take a nap. I would always sleep at 9pm. Sometimes, I would even talk in my sleep.

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When I was young, I would eat meal evenly every day. On weekends, I would take a nap. I would always sleep at 9pm. Sometimes, I would even talk in my sleep.
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>> Or: When I was young, I would have complete meals everyday. On weekends, I would take a nap. I would always go to bed at 9 in the evening. Sometimes, I would even talk in my sleep.

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