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학생이 쓴 원문
i was 10 years old, i sleep at 8pm.
Back than, i dream like the \'matrix\', and i stood apartment.
Suddenly A strange man talk to me, \'Let\'s jump together.\'
And he jumped to the another apartment.
Next i jumped too, but i fallen to the ground.
So i get up right away.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
It was nice to know that you still remember this dream. ^^
See you later.
~Teacher Gina
>> When I was 10 years old, I usually sleep at 8 pm.
Back than, i dream like the \'matrix\', and i stood apartment.
Back than, i dream like the \'matrix\', and i stood apartment.
>> Back then, I dreamed something ike \'matrix\' and I stood on top of an apartment.
Suddenly A strange man talk to me, \'Let\'s jump together.\'
Suddenly A strange man talk to me, \'Let\'s jump together.\'
>> Suddenly A strange man talked to me, \'Let\'s jump together.\'
And he jumped to the another apartment.
And he jumped to the another apartment.
>> And he jumped on another apartment.
Next i jumped too, but i fallen to the ground.
Next i jumped too, but i fallen to the ground.
>> Next, i jumped too but I fell on the ground.
So i get up right away.
So i get up right away.
>> So I got up right away.
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