When
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i was younger, i really like to watch the \'Pocket monster\'.
So i lent some Pocket monster videos at the cartoon book shop.
And i got some Pocket monster goods.
I would like to go back to the when i was watch Pocket monster at first time.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer.
Childhood memories just like this one are really precious. ^^
Anyway, see you later in class!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I really like watching the \'Pocket Monster\' when I was younger.
So i lent some Pocket monster videos at the cartoon book shop.
>> CORRECT.
And i got some Pocket monster goods.
And i got some Pocket monster goods.
>> CORRECT.
I would like to go back to the when i was watch Pocket monster at first time.
I would like to go back to the when i was watch Pocket monster at first time.
>> I would like to go back to the time when I watched Pocket Monster for the first time.
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