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Question: Writing Task: When all [people] are treated as equal, no matter who they are or whom they love, we are all more free. - Barack Obama. Do you agree with Obama? Why? Why not? 

No doubt, exactly.

>>CORRECT!

According to Universial Declaration of Human Rights, we all have inborn, natural right to live in good condition and being treated as a equal man.

>>According to the Universal Declaration of Human Rights, we all have a natural right to live in a good environment and to be treated as an equal human being.

Inborn human rights cannot be deprieved of.

>>Human rights cannot be deprived of.

And whatever his job, wherever he lives, what skin color he has, every factor does not matter.

>>And no matter what he does, no matter where he lives, no matter what color his skin is.

All human being is a creature who must be respected each as same as other.
>>Every human being should be treated with the same respect.
Let\'s see the world.

>>CORRECT!

Theorically, the constitute of every state contain the text \'everyone is equal\'.

>>Theoretically, every state\'s composition contains the text \'Everyone is equal\'.

However, inequality is spreading over the universe.

>>However, inequality is spreading throughout the universe.

And people tend to classfy the social class(ex. the rich, middle-class, the poor) based on properties.

>>And people tend to classify social classes according to their wealth.

Even thought constitutions are well-made and have great logical structure, people are not following them in society.
>>Although the Constitution is well-constructed and has a very large logical structure, people don\'t follow it in society.
Obama got a point. It is not the matter of law and institution.

>>Obama has a point. It is not a matter of law and institutions.

The attitude is most important.

>>Attitude is the most important thing.

We have to keep a social atmosphere that everyone is each respected.

>>We must maintain a social atmosphere in which everyone is respected.

And the core is \'loving all\'.

>>And the key is to love everyone.

Love gets over hatred and classification.

>>Love overcomes hatred and classification.