When and where do you usually eat out?

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I usually eat out on weekends. Because I have a schedule in home on weekdays.

>>I usually eat out on weekends because I have a schedule at home on weekdays.
 When I have special appointments, I eat out to a restaurant or cafe.

>>Correct.
I commonly go to the downtown near my home.

>>I commonly go downtown near my house.
When I eat out in Seoul, I visit hot place through SNS.

>>When I eat out in Seoul, I visit a hot place through the help of SNS.
When I hang out with my university friends, I usually eat out near the university in Seoul.

>>Correct.
I often meet the friend although I\'m resting my semester. Also, my boyfriend leave in Seoul.

>>I often meet my friend even if it\'s my semestral break.  In addition to this, I also meet my boyfriend who lives in Seoul.
These are why I go to the Seoul regularly.

>>These are the reasons why I go to Seoul regularly.
It guarantee their vibe to find restaurant through SNS.

>>It guarantees me of the good vibes in finding great restaurants through SNS.
 I want to visit many hot place that I haven\'t go because It is active for me.

>>I want to visit many hot places that I haven\'t been to because it is an enjoyable activity for me.