When are secrets a good thing?
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When I do something for my mother, I often don\'t tell to my wife about it. Because I should persuade my wife to do it. Do not telling to my wife is convenience, and nobody get hurt. Keeping good relationship between mother and wife is very difficult. I love both of them, but they should share me. Although keeping secrets is very difficult, making secrets is indispensable.
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Hi, [이름]ny! :)
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay regarding this topic.
I agree that having secrets is unavoidable.
Keeping your own secrets to your self is sometimes good because it gives you a sense of privacy and a line that people shouldn\'t cross.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again on Friday.
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay regarding this topic.
I agree that having secrets is unavoidable.
Keeping your own secrets to your self is sometimes good because it gives you a sense of privacy and a line that people shouldn\'t cross.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again on Friday.
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I do something for my mother, I often don\'t tell my wife about it.
Because I should persuade my wife to do it.
>> It\'s because I should persuade my wife to do it.
Do not telling to my wife is convenience, and nobody get hurt.
>> Not telling my wife about it is convenient and nobody gets hurt.
Keeping good relationship between mother and wife is very difficult.
>> Keeping a good relationship between my mother and my wife is very difficult.
I love both of them, but they should share me.
>> CORRECT!
Although keeping secrets is very difficult, making secrets is indispensable.
>> Although keeping secrets is very difficult, having secrets is indispensable.
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