When are secrets a good thing? Why?

2023-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think secrets a good thing in every time. It\'s because having a secret is always help us. For example, talking with someone, make a chance for us and so on. Maybe sometime, having a secrets are make us difficulty, but protect a privacy for us is good thing every time. So I think secrets a good thing in every time but sometimes, we have to be honest.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Daisy. ^^
Thank you for honestly answering this question.

I agree that there are some things that we shouldn\'t tell other people to maintain our privacy.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re warm and comfortable today. ^^
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry

I think secrets a good thing in every time.

>> I think secrets are good every time.

It\'s because having a secret is always help us.

>> It\'s because having a secret is always helpful to us.

For example, talking with someone, make a chance for us and so on.

>> For example, talking with someone gives us a chance and so on.

Maybe sometime, having a secrets are make us difficulty, but protect a privacy for us is good thing every time.

>> Maybe sometimes, having a secret may bring us difficulties but it helps us protect our privacy and it\'s a good thing for us.

So I think secrets a good thing in every time but sometimes, we have to be honest.

>> So I think having secrets is a good thing all the time but sometimes, we have to be honest.

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