When are you usually busy?

2020-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I am usually busy on Saturdays. I am taking flute lessons for 2 hours every Saturday. I also have to practice about 1 hour before starting the flute lessons. On Saturday afternoon, I go to the supermaket with may husband to buy many things. Sometimes we enjoy dating on Saturday. In the evening, I prepare special dinner for the family or some visitors.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you again for today!
Great job!
Have a safe Monday!
Teacher ELLY.
When are you usually busy?
I am usually busy on Saturdays.
CORRECT!
>>I am mostly busy every Saturday.
I am taking flute lessons for 2 hours every Saturday.
CORRECT!
or>>I have a 2-hour flute lessons every Saturday.
I also have to practice for about 1 hour before starting the flute lessons.
CORRECT!
or>>In addition, I need to practice for 1 hour before starting the flute lessons.
On Saturday afternoon, I go to the supermaket with may husband to buy many things.
>>On Saturday afternoons, I go to the supermarket with may husband to buy many things.
Sometimes, we enjoy dating on Saturday.
>>Sometimes, we enjoy dating on Saturdays.
or>>Sometimes, we have fun going on a date on a Saturday.
In the evening, I prepare special dinner for the family or some visitors.
>>In the evening, I prepare a special dinner for the family or for some visitors.

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